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Bao Tran
Please correct my writing. Thank you very much.
The environment plays an essential role in life and as such, we need to make sure it is protected not just for itself but also for the ecosystem. The environment is the air we breathe, the water we use and everything that's required of us for our lives. But pollution and a number of other things are the biggest thing for our lives now. And human activity is one of the main causes of pollution, so we can start by doing something small every day to reduce it. First, recycle, reduce and reuse most of the things. Reusable waste should not be disposed of in the garbage because it will save space for waste to be dumped on the land and because it will improve the quality of the soil. The old stuff can be used to manufacture something new, such as toys, jewelry and so on. Second, it's important to avoid plastic bags most of the time. Using reusable and washable bags must be done. As you've already noticed, it takes a lot of time for plastic bags to decompose. Third, use of cloth bags for all your needs is another way to keep environmental pollution under control. This is a way of replacing single use plastic bags. Finally, it would be a great thing to do to protect the environment. By pursuing this lifestyle, which improves health and sustainability of the world, individuals, communities and governments can become part of a collective effort to reduce their environmental footprint. We all have to face up to the urgency and necessity of addressing climate change problems in order to make our future more sustainable. This way, it is not only our environmental protection that has to be improved but also the quality of life of ourselves and future generations while everyone realises how important protecting the environment is in everyday life for a better future.
2023년 9월 20일 오후 1:32
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Please correct my writing. Thank you very much. The environment plays an
essential role in life and as such, we need to make sure it is protected not
just for itself but also for the ecosystem. The environment is the air we
breathe, the water we use, and everything that's required of us for our lives.
But pollution and several other things are the biggest thing in our lives
now. Human activity is one of the main causes of pollution, so we can start
by doing something small every day to reduce it. First, recycle, reduce, and
reuse most of the things. Reusable waste should not be disposed of in the
garbage because it will save space for waste to be dumped on the land and
because it will improve the quality of the soil. The old stuff can be used to
manufacture something new, such as toys, jewelry, and so on. Second, it's
important to avoid plastic bags most of the time. Using reusable and washable
bags must be done. As you've already noticed, it takes a lot of time for plastic
bags to decompose. Third, the use of cloth bags for all your needs is another way to
keep environmental pollution under control. This is a way of replacing single-use plastic bags. Finally, it would be a great thing to do to protect the
environment. By pursuing this lifestyle, which improves the health and
sustainability of the world, individuals, communities, and governments can become
part of a collective effort to reduce their environmental footprint. We all have
to face up to the urgency and necessity of addressing climate change problems to make our future more sustainable. This way, it is not only our
environmental protection that has to be improved but also the quality of life of
ourselves and future generations while everyone realizes how important
protecting the environment is in everyday life for a better future.
2023년 9월 20일
Please correct my writing. Thank you very much.
The environment plays an essential role in life and as such, we need to make sure it is protected not just for itself but also for the ecosystem. The environment is the air we breathe, the water we use and everything that we require for our lives. But pollution and a number of other things are the biggest thing affecting our lives now. Human activity is one of the main causes of pollution, so we can start by doing something small every day to reduce it. First, recycle, reduce and reuse most things. Reusable waste should not be disposed of in the garbage because it will save space for waste to be dumped on the land and because it will improve the quality of the soil. The old stuff can be used to manufacture something new, such as toys, jewellery and so on. Second, it's important to avoid plastic bags most of the time. Using reusable and washable bags must be done. As you've already noticed, it takes a lot of time for plastic bags to decompose. Third, use of cloth bags for all your needs is another way to keep environmental pollution under control. This is a way of replacing single use plastic bags and it would be a great thing to do to protect the environment. By pursuing this lifestyle, which improves health and sustainability for all, individuals, communities and governments can become part of a collective effort to reduce their environmental footprint. We all have to face up to the urgency and necessity of addressing climate change problems in order to make our future more sustainable. This way, it is not only our environmental protection that has to be improved but also the quality of life of ourselves and future generations while everyone realises how important protecting the environment is in everyday life for a better future.
Great work!
2023년 9월 20일
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