Sasha
커뮤니티 튜터
Does this sentence make sense? But the reality appeared to decide differently.
2023년 10월 2일 오후 7:54
답변 · 3
1
Hey - gramatically, kind of. Contextually, no. 'The reality' doesn't scan right here, the article needs to go. 'Reality had something else in store [for them]' would be more idiomatic. Making abstracts the subject of the sentence only really works in fixed phrases, otherwise it just sounds a bit odd. Matt
2023년 10월 2일
To make it a sentence, put a comma after "but". Reality lays waste to our brilliant plans. Reality doesn't have a mind. It cannot decide anything. That doesn't mean it can't have a mind in some poetic sense so your sentence can be said to make sense. However, your metaphor is not easy to interpret. Without context, it is puzzling. I see "reality" and "the reality" as being equally acceptable.
2023년 10월 3일
No. You could say "The Universe appeared to decide differently." Americans sometimes say "the Universe" instead of "God" if they are not religious. Good luck!
2023년 10월 3일
아직도 답을 찾지 못하셨나요?
질문을 남겨보세요. 원어민이 도움을 줄 수 있을 거예요!