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stephanie cardena
When I was eighteen-year-old I used to sing in a Catholic Church, that experience was one of the most important and amazing in my life. Thanks to this activity, I met my husband and now we have a beautiful family. The music means a lot of for me, I feel out of the world, I feel the power to transmit my emotions to the people just with one song.

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When I was eighteen, I used to sing for the Catholic Church. That experience was one of the most important of my life. It was amazing and thanks to this activity, I met my husband and now we have a beautiful family. Music means a lot to me. I feel out of this world and I feel the power to transmit my emotions to the crowd with song.
Saludos Stephanie! That was beautiful
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When I was eighteen-year-old I used to sing in a Catholic Church, that experience was one of the most important and amazing in my life. Thanks to this activity, I met my husband and now we have a beautiful family. The music means a lot of for me, I feel out of the world, I feel the power to transmit my emotions to the people just with one song.
FYI, the question is bad. You don't generally GO TO an ACTIVITY; you participate in it. So is should be either " . . . an artistic activity you have participated in" OR " . . . an artistic event you have been to."
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When I was eighteen-year-old I used to sing in a Catholic Church. that experience was one of the most important and amazing parts of my life Thanks to which, I met my husband and now we have a beautiful family. music means a lot to r me, it makes me feel out of the world;I feel having the power to transmit my emotions to other people just with one song.
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When I was eighteen-year-old I used to sing in a Catholic Church, that experience was one of the most important and amazing in my life. Thanks to this activity, I met my husband and now we have a beautiful family. The music means a lot of for me, I feel out of the world, I feel the power to transmit my emotions to the people just with one song.
Mr Dann nailed it, IMO.
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When I was eighteen-year-old I used to sing in a Catholic Church, that experience was one of the most important and amazing in my life. Thanks to this activity, I met my husband and now we have a beautiful family. The music means a lot of for me, I feel out of the world, I feel the power to transmit my emotions to the people just with one song.
*The music means alot to me

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