Here I prefer to travel a mountain place. In our country the Central Province is a pack of mountain. Its really cold. Its the reason that I prefer to go, I like to live in a cold place. 🌸

Nirmani Konara

2021년 10월 6일 오전 7:08

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I prefer to travel to mountainous places. In my country, the Central Province has many mountains. It’s really cold and that’s the reason I like to go there because I prefer to live in a colder place. 🌸

Hi Nirmani, nice writing, I like mountains too! Take a look at my corrections for some suggestions of alternate words and phrasing. Keep up the good work! 💪🏻

2021년 10월 6일

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