Kanae
Could someone please correct my English?
I just started watching Stranger Things. It's kind of scary, so my heart is pounding so fast while watching it. It is awesome and drew me in! Once I started watching it, I can't stop it.😂
(Japanese)
Stranger Thingsを見始めました。少し怖い感じがして、ドキドキしながら観てます。すごく面白くてハマりました！一度見出したらやめられない。
2020년 10월 10일 오전 11:51
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Could someone please correct my English? I have just started watching Stranger
Things. It's kind of scary and my heart pounds so fast while/ when I watch it.
It is awesome and has drawn me in ! Once I start watching it, I can't stop.😂
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsを見始めました。少し怖い感じがして、ドキドキしながら観てます。すごく面白くてハマりました！一度見出したらやめられない。
2020년 10월 10일
1
Could someone please correct my English? I just started watching Stranger Things. It's kind of scary, and my heart is pounding so fast when I watch it.
It is awesome and drew me in! Once I start watching it, I can't stop.😂
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsを見始めました。少し怖い感じがして、ドキドキしながら観てます。すごく面白くてハマりました！一度見出したらやめられない。
Funny, my daughter is also hooked up on Stranger Things :).
Your version is actually quite good, so consider my suggestions mostly stylistic.
Last sentence is changed with an assumption that you're saying that once you turn it on, you can't stop watching. If the idea was just to re-iterate that you started watching it and now you're hooked up, I'd just say " I can't stop watching it now".
2020년 10월 10일
Hello! If you want , could we help each other to improve english language ??
2020년 10월 11일
Could someone please correct my English? I just started watching Stranger
Things. It's kind of scary, so my heart is pounding so fast while watching it.
It is awesome and drew me in! Once I started watching it, I can't stop it.😂
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsを見始めました。少し怖い感じがして、ドキドキしながら観てます。すごく面白くてハマりました！一度見出したらやめられない。
I can teach you English but can you please teach me Japanese in return.
2020년 10월 10일
Could someone please correct my English? I just started watching Stranger
Things. It's kind of scary, so my heart is pounding so fast while watching it.
It is awesome and drew me in! Once I started watching it, I can't stop it.😂
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsを見始めました。少し怖い感じがして、ドキドキしながら観てます。すごく面白くてハマりました！一度見出したらやめられない。
No plm i m here , i m english teacher ,, will u learn english from me
2020년 10월 10일
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