Jasmine Le
Please correct my grammar mistakes: Have you ever drunk beer engineered from waste water? I watched a news on Youtube today. In Germany, people brewed beer from waste water through four purification steps and in these steps solid waste is removed. Harmful substances are turned into solid form for easier removal. At the brewery, they adjusted the water hardness to make a better beer. The tasters said this kind of beer was good like regular beer.
2024년 6월 4일 오전 5:42
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Hi Jasmine! Great work! Here's an edited version. I put my changes in brackets [ ]. Let me know if you have any questions. -Hunter TEFL Teacher "Have you ever drunk beer [made] from [wastewater]? I watched a [video about it] on YouTube today. In Germany, people [brew] beer from [wastewater] through four purification steps and in these steps solid waste is removed. [Additionally,] harmful substances [such as chemicals] are turned into solid [forms] for easier removal. At the brewery, they [adjust] the water hardness to make a better beer. The [taste testers] [say] this kind of beer [is as] good [as] regular beer."
2024년 6월 4일
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