Aya
I took the afternoon off, so I thought I would go shopping. But I decided to stay home and have a lazy day. I can't stand the heat in Japan. It's extremely hot to spend time outside. It's getting hotter and hotter these days. I feel sorry for children who can't play outside due to this heat. I feel nostalgic about the days when I used to play until dark.
2024년 8월 5일 오전 11:20
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I took the afternoon off, so I thought I would go shopping. But I decided to
stay home and have a lazy day instead. I can't stand the heat in Japan. It's extremely
hot to spend time outside. It's getting hotter and hotter these days. I feel
sorry for children who can't play outside due to this heat. I feel nostalgic
about the days when I used to play until dark.
Your sentence works, but adding "instead" helps to show that you didn't go shopping, but you did do something else.
2024년 8월 7일
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