Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did it! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even in freezing days, to

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Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did it! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even in freezing days, too.

2021년 1월 15일 오후 11:11

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Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even on colder days, too.

You did pretty good the first time around, your grammar was really good :), but I felt a few things were off in terms of word choice so I made a few corrections I felt would make it flow better

2021년 1월 15일

Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did it! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even on freezing days, too.

Nice!!

2021년 1월 16일

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