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Anna
When I was 10 years old me and my friend were going to the entertainment park I some older girls were allowing us to lead horses while other small children were riding on them. Of course those older girls made advantage from us, but we didn’t think about it, we just loved spending time with the horses.
2020년 12월 12일 오전 6:47
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When I was 10 years old, I and my friend were going to the entertainment park.
A few older girls were allowing us to lead horses while other small children were
riding on them. Of course those older girls had advantage from us, but we
didn’t think about it, we just enjoyed spending time with the horses.
What is your English level?
2020년 12월 12일
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When I was 10 years old, a friend and I went to an entertainment park.
Some older girls allowed us to lead the horses while small children rode them. Of course, the older girls took advantage of us, but we
didn’t think about it. We just loved spending time with the horses.
I recommend the famous book English Grammar in Use by Raymond Murphy. It is excellent for self study.
2020년 12월 12일
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When I was 10 years old my friend and I were going to the entertainment park.
some older girls were allowing us to lead horses while other small children were
riding on them. Of course those older girls took advantage of us, but we
didn’t think about it, we just loved spending time with the horses.
That must have been existing to lead the hourses...
You did a good job using past progressive and simple past.👍
🤞🙂
2020년 12월 12일
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