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Molly
The more work I have, the more knowledge I need and I know I should truly improve myself. However, I still sleep 9 hours a day and I don't work efficently. I feel tired and sleepy or forgetful if I sleep less, says my lazy part. It is ok but how about the time I use for surfing the internet and other trivial things I do every day? It is time I changed for a better self.
2025년 12월 7일 오후 4:48
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The more work I have, the more knowledge I need, and I know I really have to improve myself. However, I still sleep nine hours a day, and I don’t work efficiently. My lazy side says I feel tired, sleepy, or forgetful if I sleep less. That might be true, but what about the time I spend surfing the internet and doing other trivial things every day? It’s time I made a change for a better version of myself.
2025년 12월 8일 오후 3:05
The more work I have, the more knowledge I need and I know I should really improve myself. However, I still sleep 9 hours a day and I don't work efficiently. My lazy self convinces me that I would feel tired and sleepy or forgetful if I sleep less. It is ok but what about the time I spend surfing the internet and doing other trivial things every day? It is time for me to improve myself.
Good work Molly, not everyone is equal when it comes to sleep unfortunately. Take care.
2025년 12월 8일 오전 9:48
The more work I have, the more knowledge I need, and I know I should improve myself. However, while I sleep 9 hours a day, I don't work efficiently. The lazy part of me says I feel tired, sleepy, or forgetful if I sleep less. Sleeping is not a waste of time, but how about the time I spend online and the other trivial things I do every day? It is time I changed myself for the better.
Nice writing! I changed some things to make it more natural.
2025년 12월 7일 오후 6:51
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