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Haruka
Hello! It's getting more colder these days, so It's hard to wake up in the morning. Today, I'm going to talk about I want to visit country. This is Germany! I have been interested in there since I was a junior high school student. It all started when I saw the Japanese variety show called Itte Q. I only know English, so I have stared interested in German. I took it as a second language in university. I was nervous at first, but since there were many similarities with English, I became able to read it as I got used to it. h However, grammar is very difficult for me. Getting back to the topic, there are many events such as Oktoberfest and Christmas market, and delicious looking food in Germany. Oktoberfest and Christmas market is held in Yokohama Red Brick Warehouse every October and November. I could have fun here, but I wanted to experience the authentic German atmosphere. I've seen it in photos and videos, but the difference is the scale. There are few shops in Yokohama, but there are many shops and people in Germany. Regarding food, Germany is famous for its sausages and beer. I want to try beer, but I'm not old enough to drink beer yet, so I want to go when I'm old enough to drink beer. Furthermore, my father said that I want to go to Germany too, so I hope we can go together.
2023년 11월 27일 오전 2:37
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Hello! It's getting colder these days, so it's hard to wake up in the morning. Today, I'm going to talk about a country (that/which) I want to visit. It's Germany! I have been interested in it since I was a junior high school student. It all started when I saw a Japanese variety show called Itte Q. I only knew English, so I became interested in German. I took it as a second language at university. I was nervous at first, but since there are many similarities between English and German, I became able to read it as I got used to it. However, its grammar is still very difficult for me. Getting back to the topic, there are many events such as Oktoberfest and Christmas market and delicious looking food in Germany. Oktoberfest and Christmas market is held in Yokohama Red Brick Warehouse every October and November. I could have fun here, but I wanted to experience the authentic German atmosphere. I've seen it in photos and videos, but the difference is the scale. There are fewer shops in Yokohama, but there are far more shops and people in Germany. Regarding food, Germany is famous for its sausages and beer. I want to try beer, but I'm not old enough to drink beer yet, so I want to go for a drink when I get old enough. Furthermore, my father said that he wants to go to Germany too, so I hope we can go together.
Sehr gut!! Wunderbar!! Your posting is amazing because it shows that you are fully enjoying your daily life with great interest in Germany. I hope you will visit Germany one day and have various unforgettable experiences!!
2023년 12월 12일
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