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The Tim じぁん!!!
The weather is fair today. After a brief shower, the sun shines again. Despite being called winter, the weather hasn't quite caught up. As the rain stopped, I accompanied my mom on a shopping trip. She had planned to cook Sukiyaki tonight. We bought some premium beef, vegetable combos, and tofu. It was the perfect dish to have at home during winter, although we had to keep the air conditioner on while eating. After all, it was still a hot pot.
2023년 11월 12일 오전 10:38
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The weather is fair today. After taking a brief shower, I see the sun shine again. Despite that it is winter, the weather hasn't quite caught up. With the rain stopping, I accompanied my mom on a shopping trip. She had planned to cook Sukiyaki tonight. We bought some premium beef, vegetable combos, and tofu. It was the perfect dish to have at home during winter. We had to keep the air conditioner on while eating. After all, it was still a hot pot.
"After a shower, the sun shines" means that the sun took a shower. The two thoughts "it was the perfect dish" and "we had to keep the air conditioner on" are unrelated. They should be in two separate sentences.
2023년 11월 12일
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The weather is fair today. After a brief shower, the sun is shining again. Despite
being called winter, the weather hasn't quite caught up. As (do you mean because or at the time the rain stopped?) the rain stopped, I
accompanied my mom on a shopping trip. She had planned to cook Sukiyaki tonight.
We bought some premium beef, vegetable combos, and tofu. It was the perfect dish
to have at home during winter, although we had to keep the air conditioner on
while eating. After all, it was still a hot pot.
Sounds great. I went to a Chinese restaurant to eat 锅包肉 yesterday, my favourite.
2023년 11월 12일
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