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Good morning. It’s very hot again today. I’m walking to the university, but it’s so hot that I’m about to collapse. I had a German test today, but it didn’t go well. I studied a lot, but it didn’t work. I was very disappointed because I spent a lot of time preparing for the test. I hope I can do better next time. After my classes, I just want to go home, relax, and get some rest because I’m very tired.
2026년 7월 16일 오전 4:14
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Good morning. It’s very hot again today. I’m walking to university, but it’s so hot that I feel like I’m about to collapse. I had a German test today, but it didn’t go well. I studied a lot, but it wasn’t enough. I was very disappointed because I spent a lot of time preparing for the test. I hope I can do better next time. After my classes, I just want to go home, relax, and get some rest because I’m very tired.
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, clear, and emotionally expressive. You explain your feelings and experiences naturally, and your use of linking words is very effective. Your grammar is accurate, and only a few small changes were needed to make your English sound even more natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 16일 오후 1:17
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