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Today, I only had my part-time job at night. I wanted to do my homework, but I did not do it. I wasted my day, and I felt a little disappointed. Tomorrow, I also only have my part-time job at night. So, I will do my homework in the morning and before I go to work. I want to use my time better.
2026년 7월 18일 오후 1:58
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Today, I only had my part-time job in the evening. I wanted to do my homework, but I didn’t. I wasted my day, and I felt a little disappointed. Tomorrow, I also only have my part-time job in the evening, so I will do my homework in the morning and before I go to work. I want to use my time more effectively.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, natural, and well structured. You express your feelings and future plans effectively, and your ideas flow smoothly. Only a few small vocabulary and style adjustments were needed to make your English sound more natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 18일 오후 9:43
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