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Good morning. It's hot today, so I'm going to stay at home for a day. I have to study because I have a lot of tests this week. I had a part-time job until late at night yesterday. Recently, I often stay up until 3 a.m. That's why I haven't slept much. I sleep a lot today.
2026년 7월 19일 오전 3:49
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Good morning. It’s hot today, so I’m going to stay at home all day. I have to study because I have a lot of tests this week. I had a part-time job until late last night. Recently, I’ve often been staying up until 3:00 a.m. That’s why I haven’t been getting much sleep. I’m going to sleep a lot today.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, fluent, and easy to follow. You describe your routine and explain the reason for your tiredness very naturally. The corrections were mainly about using more idiomatic expressions and keeping the verb tenses consistent. Overall, this is a strong C1-level piece of writing. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 19일 오전 9:25
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