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After that, we went shopping in the city. I wanted to buy clothes and Chinese cosmetics in Hong Kong. But for some reason, my friend wanted to go to Japanese stores. By the way, there are many Japanese stores in Hong Kong. Because she kept going to those stores, I couldn’t visit the shops I wanted to go to. It was really disappointing.
2026년 7월 19일 오후 2:50
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After that, we went shopping in the city. I wanted to buy some clothes and Chinese cosmetics in Hong Kong, but for some reason, my friend wanted to go to Japanese shops instead. By the way, there are many Japanese shops in Hong Kong. Because she kept going to those shops, I couldn’t visit the ones I wanted to go to. It was really disappointing.
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Your writing is fluent, coherent, and very easy to understand. You describe the events and your feelings naturally, and the story flows well from one sentence to the next. Only a few vocabulary choices were adjusted to make the text sound more natural in British English. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 19일 오후 2:59
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