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Today, after English classes at the university, I attended a biology class. Since I have a biology test next Wednesday, I paid closer attention than usual. After that, I went to my part-time job. It was really busy today because there weren’t many crews. Since I also have a psychology test on Saturday,
2026년 7월 23일 오전 11:16
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Today, after my English class at university, I attended a biology class. Since I have a biology test next Wednesday, I paid closer attention than usual. After that, I went to my part-time job. It was really busy today because there weren’t many staff members. Since I also have a psychology test on Saturday, I need to study hard this week.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear and well organised. You describe your school day and work naturally, and your grammar is strong. The only real issue was that the final sentence was incomplete. Apart from that, only one vocabulary choice ("staff members" instead of "crews") needed changing. Excellent work! 😊
2026년 7월 23일 오후 12:36
Today is very hot. I think it is the hottest day of the year. When I go outside, I sweat a lot. So, I will eat a good breakfast because I don’t want to get sick. Today, I have classes from the second period. I also have my part-time job at night. Before my part-time job, I will do my homework. I have a lot of homework, so I want to finish some of it today.
Level: B2+/C1.
Your writing is clear and natural. You can describe your daily plans and explain your reasons well. The grammar is accurate, and the main improvements were related to making a few expressions sound more natural in English. Good job! 😊
2026년 7월 23일 오후 12:35
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