Could you correct this, please
Recently I’ve started to read an interesting book, about grit/persistence. I’m reading it in Russian and now I realize that I actually could read it in English so it will help me to tell about it easier🙈 so this book about grit/persistence. It’s not about talent. Actually not talented person could achieve more if he is persistent enough, I love that idea. I knew that learning languages it’s more about how much time and effort you dedicate for it, but now I’m convinced even more, that I can be fluent one day if I don’t give up/ quit. ☺️ in sha Allah🤲
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Could you correct this, please?
Recently, I started reading an interesting book about grit and perseverance. I’m reading it in Russian, but now I’ve realised that I could actually read it in English. That would make it much easier for me to talk about it later. 🙈
The book is about grit and perseverance rather than talent. In fact, someone who is not naturally talented can achieve more if they are persistent enough. I really love that idea.
I already knew that learning languages is more about how much time and effort you dedicate to it than about talent, but now I’m even more convinced that I can become fluent one day if I don’t give up. ☺️ In shaa Allah. 🤲
Level: C1.
This is a thoughtful and motivating piece of writing. You express your personal reflections clearly, and the connection between the book and your language-learning journey is engaging. Most of the corrections were about making the English sound more natural and idiomatic rather than fixing grammar. Excellent work! 😊
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