다양한 영어 선생님을 검색해 보세요...
七七77
Please help me correct this.
The illusion of being busy isn’t the same as being productive. We need to look beyond the superficial work. It only devalues our efficiency and effort. What matters is not how you show to others, but how you show to yourself.
2026년 7월 28일 오후 2:47
교정 · 1
1
Please help me correct this.
The illusion of being busy is not the same as being productive. We need to look beyond superficial work. It only reduces our efficiency and wastes our effort. What matters is not how you present yourself to others, but how you show up for yourself.
Level: C1.
This is a thoughtful and motivational piece of writing. You express your message clearly, and the contrast between appearance and genuine productivity is effective. The corrections mainly improve the idiomatic use of English rather than the grammar. Excellent work! 😊
2026년 7월 28일 오후 8:03
더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?
이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!
