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I drank a bottle of Oronamin C Drink. It was in glass bottle, so It was cold. I ate water melons after school. It's sweet relaxing for me. I have final exams tomorrow.I need study English vocabularys, but I want to will study after nap. I can't study yesterday because I wake up late, so I setting alarm on phone.

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I drank a bottle of Oronamin C Drink. It was in a glass bottle, so it was cold. I ate watermelon after school. It is sweet and relaxing for me. I have my final exams tomorrow. I need to study English vocabulary, but I will study after a nap. I couldn’t study yesterday because I woke up late, so I set an alarm on my phone.
Level: B1 Your ideas are clear and easy to understand. To improve your English further, please pay attention to the use of articles, verb tenses, uncountable nouns (such as vocabulary), and past tense forms. Keep up the good work! 🌸

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