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Today, I had speech in English class.
I talk about the problems of corporal punishment.I believe corporal punishment is not a good way to educate children. I think my speech was not bad.
I drove at night with my father. We through near seaside. I returned my home and ate some cookies. I thought can good sleep.
2026년 7월 14일 오후 1:37
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Today, I gave a speech in my English class. I talked about the problems of corporal punishment. I believe that corporal punishment is not a good way to educate children. I think my speech went quite well. I drove at night with my father. We drove along the seaside. When I got home, I ate some cookies. I thought I would sleep well tonight.
Level: B2.
Your ideas are clear and easy to follow, and you communicate your opinions well. To improve further, pay attention to verb tenses, natural expressions, and sentence structure. Keep practising, you are making good progress! 😊
2026년 7월 14일 오후 10:39
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