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Agatha
Hi everyone! I'm trying to learn english because I think that it's a beautiful language and it is very important at our days. I want to be fluent and one day I can travelling all over the world. I really want to visit a lot of countries, with differents cultures and stories. I will go to Japan, France, USA and England, I'm quite excited at only thought this, but I am a little scared because I think that I can't do, I want to try. Thank you for have reading at this point!
P.S: if I fall, correct me please :)
2026년 7월 14일 오후 3:26
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Hi everyone! I'm trying to learn English because I think it's a beautiful language, and it's very important nowadays. I want to become fluent so that one day I can travel all over the world. I really want to visit many countries with different cultures and histories. I would love to visit Japan, France, the USA, and England. I'm quite excited just thinking about it, but I'm also a little scared because I don't think I can do it. Still, I want to try. Thank you for reading this far! 😊
P.S. If I make any mistakes, please correct me!
Level: B2.
Your message is friendly, engaging, and easy to understand. You communicate your goals and enthusiasm clearly, which makes your writing enjoyable to read. To improve further, focus on verb forms, natural expressions, articles, and common collocations. You're making great progress. Keep writing and don't be afraid of making mistakes! 😊
2026년 7월 14일 오후 10:36
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