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Today is the second day of Aimyon’s concert at Koshien Stadium. I will buy some goods and eat lunch with my friend before the concert. Yesterday, I went to the concert after school, so I could not enjoy everything. Today, I can watch the concert from the beginning to the end. After the concert, I will go home by night bus. Tomorrow, I have classes from the third period.
2026년 7월 14일 오후 7:03
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Today is the second day of Aimyon’s concert at Koshien Stadium. I’m going to buy some merchandise and have lunch with my friend before the concert. Yesterday, I went to the concert after school, so I couldn’t enjoy the whole show. Today, I can watch the concert from beginning to end. After the concert, I’ll go home by overnight bus. Tomorrow, I have classes starting from the third period.
Level: C1
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2026년 7월 14일 오후 10:32
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