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I have a part-time job today from morning until night. I really want to go home. I have a French test tomorrow, so I need to start studying soon. I want to do lots of different things during summer vacation, so I need to save up money—that’s why I have to work hard now. I also want to buy some clothes, so I’ll work hard for that, too.
2026년 7월 15일 오전 6:33
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I have a part-time job today from morning until night. I really want to go home. I have a French test tomorrow, so I need to start studying soon. I want to do lots of different things during the summer holidays, so I need to save up money. That’s why I have to work hard now. I also want to buy some clothes, so I’ll work hard for that too.
Level: C1.
Your writing is clear, fluent, and well organised. You express your plans and motivations naturally, and your ideas flow logically from one sentence to the next. To make your English sound even more polished, continue refining punctuation and small stylistic details. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 15일 오전 10:47
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