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Henri Fernandes
One of the best ways to improve the extreme case of temperature nowadays is to invest in renewable energy.There is tons of fabrics, polluting our atmosphere with the emissions of gases like oxonium and methane and ,unfortunately, it won't heal anytime soon.
2023년 3월 11일 오후 7:40
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Here's a revised version of your sentence that's a bit clearer:
One of the best ways to address the issue of extreme temperatures today is to invest in renewable energy. There are numerous factories and other sources of pollution that contribute to emissions of gases such as carbon dioxide and methane, which harm our atmosphere and unfortunately, the damage is unlikely to heal anytime soon.
2023년 3월 11일
One of the best ways to improve the extreme case of temperature nowadays is to
invest in renewable energy. There are tons of fabrics in landfills, polluting our atmosphere
with the emissions of gases like oxonium and methane and unfortunately, it
won't heal anytime soon.
Tons is plural so you should use are instead of is.
You should specify what fabrics you are talking about, as fabrics themselves are not the problem so I suggested mentioning landfills.
Great job! Keep practicing 👍🏻
2025년 3월 13일 오후 11:44
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