wendy
When you ask this question,we should understand who can answer it best? Parents or children? As for parents. they usually work hard and build better life conditions to make sure that their children can live and be educated in a high level.But as for children,when you ask them what can make them happy,they definitely say that the love from their parents is the most precious gift.They'd like to share their happiness with their parents and need comfort from their parents when they feel sad.The relationship between parents and their children can't be measured by money or materials.The best way to maintain the parent-child relationship is on make friends with each other.No matter who of them faces difficulties the first people comes into their mind is their parents or children.We need to realize the true meaning of family again. just from how to get along with our children.
2023년 3월 19일 오전 1:27
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When you ask this question, we should try to understand who can answer it best. Parents or children? As for parents, they usually work hard to build better lives/better living conditions so their children can live and be educated at a high level. But as for children, when you ask them what would make them happy, they definitely say that love from their parents is the most precious gift. They'd like to share their happiness with their parents, and they need comfort from their parents when they feel sad. The relationship between parents and their children can't be measured by money or materials [perhaps "material possessions"]. The best way to maintain the parent-child relationship is to have them make friends with each other. No matter which of them faces difficulties, the first people who come to their mind will be their parents or children. We need to realize the true meaning of family again, just from how to get along with our children.
The sentence, "No matter which of them ... parents or children," was difficult to correct because its basic structure is unusual to English. I would rephrase it entirely. Perhaps: "If the parents face difficulties, they will think of their children first; if the children face difficulties, then they will think of their parents first." It sounds a little redundant, and someone could probably improve it, but at least it sounds like more idiomatic English to me. I don't think English is so good at combining this reciprocal relationship in just one expression the way you did.
2023년 3월 19일
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