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Vivian
There is a cafe near my house, and I often go there in the afternoon. The aspect of this cafe is that there are some cats, so you can drink your coffee and play with them. I normally bring a English novel and read there. I love the environment there because it make me feel cozy and comfortable.
Please correct sentence and grammar, thank you!
2023년 10월 30일 오전 9:24
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There is a cafe near my house, and I often go there in the afternoon. The aspect of this cafe is that there are some cats, so you can drink your coffee and play with them. I normally bring an English novel and read there. I love the environment there because it makes me feel cozy and comfortable.
It's great to see your writing about the cafe near your house. You've done a good job of describing the cozy atmosphere and the presence of cats, which adds a unique touch to the place. Your use of English is clear and easy to understand. One suggestion for improvement would be to vary your sentence structure a bit more to make your writing even more engaging. Keep up the good work, and happy reading with those friendly feline companions!
2023년 10월 31일
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There is a cafe near my house and I often go there in the afternoon. A particular aspect/feature
of this cafe is that there are some cats, so you can drink your coffee and play
with them. I normally bring an English novel and read there. I love the
environment there because it feels cozy and comfortable. Please correct the sentences and grammar, thank you!
2023년 10월 30일
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