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Today, the weather is crispy. I like this weather. It was a bit cold in the early morning when I went out of the house but I got warmer when I run. I can run better under this weather without getting tired fastly.
2023년 10월 31일 오전 12:54
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Today, the weather is crisp. I like this weather. It was a bit cold in the early morning when I left the house but I warmed up as I ran. I can run better in weather like this without quickly tiring (out).
We normally say "crisp". "Crispy" is a word we would use to describe a cold breakfast cereal. Nonetheless, "crispy" is not wrong.
If you avoid "get", your vocabulary will improve. It can almost always be replaced by a better verb. To discover what verb to use, look at your adjectives:
"I got warmer" can be replaced with "I warmed up".
"getting tired" can be replaced with "tiring out".
Instead of "it was a bit cold" (which is correct), you can say "it was a bit nippy".
2023년 10월 31일
Today, the weather is crisp. I like this weather. It was a bit cold in the early morning when I went out of the house but I got warmer when I ran. I can run better in this weather without getting tired quickly.
We can say weather is CRISP, but not CRISPY (I don't it doesn't make much sense). FASTLY is not a word. FAST is both an adjective and an adverb. Nice job!
2023년 10월 31일
Today, the weather is crispy. I like this weather. It was a bit cold early in the morning when I went out of the house, but I got warmer when I ran. I can run better under this weather without getting tired faster.
2023년 10월 31일
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