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I started to learn English because since I was a kid I always found amazing how different people can make different sounds of mine, and how they still can communicate ( I know it's silly but was just a kid, I found this amazing when I first saw this ). How different could be their daily lives? What would I eat if I had born there? How is their cultures? and to learn more about I started to learning languages, I feel just so motivated when I realize that I am more closer to what i had imagined when I was little, that with a little more focus I will be able to talk just like these persons that I found amazing when I was kid. I think that my little me would be proud.
2022년 1월 12일 오후 10:22
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I started to learn English because since I was a kid I always found amazing how different people can make different sounds of mine, and how they still can communicate ( I know it's silly but was just a kid, I found this amazing when I first saw this ). How different could be their daily lives? What would I eat if I had born there? How is their cultures? and to learn more about I started to learning languages, I feel just so motivated when I realize that I am more closer to what i had imagined when I was little, that with a little more focus I will be able to talk just like these persons that I found amazing when I was kid. I think that my little me would be proud. Firstly, it is a good practice to use the present continuous tense in this case because you are still learning English. Secondly, based on my understanding of your sounds as a kid that people made and communicate, I think you're referring to a "toddler" (a little baby between the range of about 0-1 year old" kids use words toddler make sounds. I started learning English because since I was a toddler, I always find it amazing how different people makes different sounds of mine and still communicate. How different is their daily lives? What would I be eating if I was born there? and how is their culture? To learn more about all these I started learning languages. I feel so motivated realizing that I am getting closer to what I had imagined as a little child and with a little more focus, I will be able to speak just like these persons I found amazing when I was a kid. I think my little me would be proud. Hope this helps? You've written a beautiful story and the best piece of writing I have read today. Regards.
Hi, your English is not bad though they're a few things i'll recommend you polish them up.
2022년 1월 12일
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