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Composition: Ferris Wheel Ride
Up, up, and away! I climbed into the giant Ferris wheel car with Mom. It felt like a rising hot balloon, dangling and ascending gently. The ground began to shrink below us. Soon, we were eye-level with fluffy white clouds, like giant cotton candy in the sky!
The whole world looked like a miniature model set. Cars looked like tiny beetles scooting along roads, and people were like dots. We waved to everyone who waved back.
The wind tickled our cheeks as we reached the peak, and for a moment, it felt like we were flying!
Then, slowly, we began to descend. Back down to earth, but with happy memories and giant grins on our faces. The Ferris wheel ride was an adventure to the top of the world (well, almost)!
2024년 6월 4일 오전 10:22
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Composition: Ferris Wheel Ride Up, up, and away! I climbed into the giant Ferris
wheel car with Mom. It felt like a rising hot balloon, dangling and ascending
gently. The ground began to shrink below us. Soon, we were eye-level with fluffy
white clouds, like giant cotton candy in the sky! The whole world looked like a
miniature model set. Cars looked like tiny beetles scooting along roads, and
people were like dots. We waved to everyone who waved back. The wind tickled our
cheeks as we reached the peak, and for a moment, it felt like we were flying!
Then, slowly, we began to descend. Back down to earth, but with happy memories
and giant grins on our faces. The Ferris wheel ride was an adventure to the top
of the world (well, almost)!
No corrections needed. Sometimes when looking at people from high up we say they look like ants.
2024년 6월 4일
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