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Yesterday morning, I came back home, so I slept all day. I had no plans, so I was happy that I could sleep without worrying about time. When I woke up, it was already evening, and I was really surprised. After that, I had many assignments to do, so I finished some of them. I want to finish all my homework before summer vacation starts. Then, I can enjoy summer and have a lot of fun!
2025년 7월 20일 오전 10:27
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Yesterday morning, I came back home (late/after a long journey: I mean some cause that you were tired), so I slept all day. I had no plans, and I was happy that I could sleep without worrying about (the) time. When I woke up, it was already evening, and I was really surprised. After that, I had many assignments (chores, tasks) to do, and I finished some of them. I want to finish all my homework before the summer vacation starts. Then, I can enjoy summer and have a lot of fun!
Too many 'so'-s! It's not wrong just not stylish to repeat the same word. Also 'so' mostly means there is a logical connection between two things. And that is not directly clear in this little essay. They only 'real' error is not putting 'the' before summer vacation in the penultimate sentence.
2025년 7월 21일 오후 12:40
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