Margaux
This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in Paris 5th arrondissement.
I took this picture yesterday while walking a bit because of the second time lockdown in France.
It was a chilly but sunny day, and I loved every part of it !
Do you know this place ? Have you ever been there ?
(Please correct me if I made a mistake in english 🙂)
2020년 11월 5일 오후 9:45
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This is a photo of the Luxembourg Gardens, located in Paris’ 5th district. I took this
photo yesterday while on a short walk, as we are currently in our second nation-wide lockdown. It was a chilly, but sunny day, and I loved every part of it! Do you
know of this place? Have you ever visited before? (Please correct me if I made any
mistakes in English 🙂)
Overall, you write very well! I just fine tuned it a bit to match how I would have written it :)
2020년 11월 6일
This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in Paris’s 5th arrondissement. I took this
picture yesterday while walking a bit as a result of the second lockdown in
France. It was a chilly but sunny day, and I loved every part of it! Do you
know this place? Have you ever been there? (Please correct me if I made a
mistake in English 🙂)
En anglais on ne met pas d’espace entre un mot et un point d’exclamation ou un point d’interrogation. :)
2020년 11월 6일
This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in Paris 5th arrondissement. I took this
picture yesterday while walking a bit because of the second time lockdown in
France. It was a chilly but sunny day, and I loved every part of it ! Do you
know this place ? Have you ever been there ? (Please correct me if I made a
mistake in english 🙂
Bonjour Margaux,this is all very good,some suggestions for you; in the 5th arrondissement of Paris.While walking around these beautiful gardens yesterday, I took this picture.In France, we now have this second lockdown. It was a lovely day for November, sunny and chillly. Yes I have been to these gardens,they are beautiful.Could you please correct any mistakes?J’espère que cela peut vous aider.
2020년 11월 5일
This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in the Paris 5th arrondissement. I took this
picture yesterday while walking a bit, because of the second lockdown in
France. It was a chilly, but sunny, day, and I loved every part of it ! Do you
know this place ? Have you ever been there ? (Please correct me if I made a
mistake in English 🙂)
This sounds pretty native. I changed “second time” lockdown to “second” lockdown. I capitalized the word English. Nice job!
2020년 11월 5일
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