My hometown is located in the southeast coastal area of China. I love my hometown very much! because I love sea. The picture was beautiful when the sun set on the sea and scenery is charming.

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Anna

2020년 11월 9일 오전 5:00

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My hometown is located in the southeast coastal area of China. I love my hometown very much because love the sea. The picture is beautiful because it shows the sunset on the sea and the scenery is charming.

Good attempt Anna, I just made changes needed to make your paragraph a fuller presentation. It is a really beautiful photo, I hope you share more with us.

2020년 11월 9일

My hometown is located in the southeast coastal area of China. I love my hometown very much! because I love sea. The picture was beautiful when the sun set on the sea and scenery is charming.

It is indeed beautiful and if you took this pictures I want to say it is just perfect, I like the beach very much myself. Will you be kind enough to teach me mandarin language? I can teach you English

2020년 11월 9일

My hometown is located in the southeast coastal area of China. I love my hometown very much because I love sea/beach! The picture was taken when the sun set on the sea and scenery was charming.

哇！太美麗了！😍

2020년 11월 16일

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