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It was sunny today. Over dinner, Mom abruptly initiated a quarrel with Dad. She seemed to be in a particularly grumpy mood. I can't say it was completely unexpected—every time she's unwell, she tends to become irritable. She harshly chided Dad, brandishing her hand in a way that was hard to ignore. I didn't want to appear flabbergasted, but she swiftly redirected her fury towards me as soon as Dad backed down. I had no choice but to retreat with my plate into my room to finish my dinner in peace. Thankfully, MeeMaw didn't show up today; otherwise, she might have become another victim.
2024년 11월 27일 오전 11:25
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It was sunny today. Over dinner, Mom abruptly initiated a quarrel with Dad. She
seemed to be in a particularly grumpy mood. I can't say it was completely
unexpected—every time she's unwell, she tends to become irritable. She harshly
chided Dad, brandishing her hand in a way that was hard to ignore. I didn't want
to appear flabbergasted, but she swiftly redirected her fury towards me as soon
as Dad backed down. I had no choice but to retreat with my plate into my room to
finish my dinner in peace. Thankfully, MeeMaw didn't show up today; otherwise,
she might have become another victim.
Oh dear. Hope it all calmed down!
2024년 11월 28일
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It was sunny today. Over dinner, Mom, seemingly in a particularly grumpy mood, abruptly initiated a quarrel with Dad. I can't say it was completely
unexpected, because every time she's unwell, she has a tendency to become somewhat irritable. She harshly
chided Dad, brandishing her hand at him in a way that was hard to ignore. I didn't want
to appear flabbergasted, but she swiftly redirected her fury towards me as soon
as Dad backed down. I had no choice but to retreat with my plate into my room to
finish my dinner in peace. Thankfully, MeeMaw didn't show up today; otherwise,
she might have become another victim.
Your original text is great! I’ve just suggested a few small edits to make it read more naturally (as if if it were a novel, for example). So you haven’t have errors, as such, I’m just making some suggestions.
2024년 11월 27일
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