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90 day's training: Day 9
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I like to eat bread but I often eat rice because rice is healthy and much more reasonable than bread.
2) I eat bread a little more often recently because of nationaly lack of rice. It is caused by the bad weather last summer.
3) Our stock of rice is only 3 or 4 Kg now. We are expecting that this year's production will goes up and new rice come to supermarkets next month.
4) By the way, Japanese bread is mostly soft and a little airy. I prefer to German bread which more heavy and tight.
5) My favourite is sandwich with eggs, cheese, ham and lettuce. I wanted to buy it yesterday but all sandwiches were sold out.
2024년 9월 11일 오전 9:10
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90 day's training: Day 9
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I like to eat bread but I often eat rice instead because it is healthier and much more reasonable than bread. [I don't understand what you mean by "reasonable". Are you thinking of price? quality? nutrition?]
2) I have been eating bread more frequently because of a national shortage of rice caused by last summer's bad weather.
3) Our stock of rice is only 3 or 4 kg now. We are expecting this year's production to go up and new rice to arrive in supermarkets next month.
4) By the way, Japanese bread is mostly soft and airy. I prefer it to German bread which is heavier and more dense.
5) My favorite dish is sandwich with eggs, cheese, ham and lettuce. I wanted to buy one yesterday but all sandwiches were sold out.
2024년 9월 11일
90 day's training: Day 9 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance.
🐰 1) I like to eat bread but I often eat rice because rice is healthier than bread. 2) I recently started to eat bread a little more often because
of the lack of rice nationally. It has been caused by bad weather last summer. 3) Our
stock of rice is only 3 or 4 Kg now. We are expecting that this year's
production will go up and fresh rice will come to our supermarkets next month. 4) By the
way, Japanese bread is mostly soft and a little airy. I prefer it to German bread
which is more heavy and compacted. 5) My favourite is a sandwich with eggs, cheese, ham
and lettuce. I wanted to buy one yesterday but all the sandwiches were sold out.
Bread can't reason! But well done!! You could say IT is more reasonable to eat bread.
2024년 9월 11일
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