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A wise investment strategy is what you can do consistently. To invest consistently, you should know what you are doing well. If not, you will get anxious easily by ups and downs in price or by bad news, which can lead to bad decisions. So invest in what you know how it works. Or study it before making investment.

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A wise investment strategy is one that you can follow consistently. To invest consistently, you should understand what you are investing in and know how it works. If not, you can easily become anxious about price fluctuations or bad news, which can lead to poor decisions. So, invest in things you understand. Or, if you don’t understand an investment, study it carefully before investing.
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A wise investment strategy is one that you can follow consistently. To invest consistently, you should have a good understanding of what you are doing. Otherwise, you may easily become anxious about ups and downs in prices or bad news, which can lead to poor decisions. So, invest in something you understand and know how it works. Or study it carefully before making an investment. So invest in what you know how it works. Or study it before making investment.
“One that you can follow consistently” is more natural than “what you can do consistently” when talking about a strategy. “Understand what you are doing” is more natural here than “know what you are doing well.” “Become anxious about” is more natural than “get anxious by.” “Ups and downs in prices” is more natural than “ups and downs in price” when speaking generally. “Something you understand and know how it works” makes the last idea clearer. “Before making an investment” needs “an” because “investment” is a countable noun here.
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A wise investment strategy is what you can do consistently. To invest consistently, you should know what you are doing well. If not, you will easily get anxious by ups and downs in price or by bad news, which can lead to bad decisions. So invest in what you know and how it works. Or study it before making an investment.

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