Last year I went to Hong Kong with my friend. but it was not fun in there because many problems happened. First, my SIM card that I bought at the airport in Japan didn’t use. It was terrible. It was inconvenient because I couldn’t use my phone so I wanted to buy new it, but my friend said I think didn’t need one. And we did what my friend wanted to do instead. It was my fault that it didn’t work but I didn’t feel happy.
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Last year, I went to Hong Kong with my friend, but it was not a fun experience because many problems happened. First, the SIM card that I bought at the airport in Japan did not work. It was terrible. It was very inconvenient because I couldn’t use my phone. I wanted to buy a new one, but my friend said that I probably didn’t need one. Instead, we did what my friend wanted to do. I know it was my fault that the SIM card didn’t work, but I still didn’t feel happy.
Level: B2.
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