The next day, we surprisingly went to a police station. My friend wanted to go because she lost her card and got scammed. We stayed there for three hours, but nothing was solved. I was bored, so I talked with the police officers. The police officers in Hong Kong were very kind.
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The next day, we unexpectedly went to a police station. My friend wanted to go because she had lost her card and had been scammed. We stayed there for three hours, but nothing was resolved. I was bored, so I talked with the police officers. The police officers in Hong Kong were very kind.
Level: B2+/C1.
Your writing is clear and easy to follow. You describe events in a logical order and express your feelings naturally. Your use of past tenses is improving, and you can already write about more complex situations. To reach a stronger C1 level, continue focusing on precise vocabulary and using more advanced tense structures when describing sequences of events. Excellent work! 😊
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