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Today is the final session of my second-period media class. We’ll wrap up the presentations. Since the third and fourth periods are on Zoom, I’ll finish up at school early today. After school, I’m going to my part-time job from 6:00 p.m. to 10:00 p.m. I’m feeling better today than I did yesterday.
2026년 7월 17일 오전 1:10
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Today is the final session of my second-period media class. We’ll finish our presentations. Since my third- and fourth-period classes are on Zoom, I’ll finish school early today. After school, I’m going to my part-time job from 6:00 p.m. to 10:00 p.m. I’m feeling much better today than I did yesterday.
Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You describe your schedule clearly and use a good range of time expressions. Your grammar is very accurate, and only a few small stylistic changes were needed to make your English sound even more natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026년 7월 17일 오후 12:43
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