Today, I went to my part-time job. For lunch, I ate cold sesame noodles, which were very delicious. I especially liked the mixed rice with salmon. I worked hard as both a cashier and a runner, so I be

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Today, I went to my part-time job. For lunch, I ate cold sesame noodles, which were very delicious. I especially liked the mixed rice with salmon. I worked hard as both a cashier and a runner, so I became very tired. For dinner, I ate pasta with my mother. I was also happy because I could eat a limited-time dessert.

2026년 7월 18일 오후 3:02

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Today, I went to my part-time job. For lunch, I ate cold sesame noodles, which were very delicious. I especially liked the salmon mixed rice. I worked hard as both a cashier and a runner, so I became very tired. For dinner, I ate pasta with my mother. I was also happy because I got to have a limited-time dessert.

Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, clear, and natural. You describe your work and meals effectively, and your use of vocabulary related to your part-time job is very good. Only minor collocation adjustments were needed to make the sentences sound more like a native speaker’s writing. Excellent work! 😊

2026년 7월 18일 오후 9:47

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