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Goretti Prego
In my opinion, i think two people have a good relationship, they have to be Happy for themselves. Also, it's very important, they always say the true. In a healthy relationship, the confidence,the repect and the comucation are the unique possible way.
2021년 9월 29일 오후 12:07
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In my opinion, people need to be happy with themselves to have a good relationship. Also, it's very important for both parties to always convey the truth. In a healthy relationship, the confidence, the respect and the comucation are the unique possible way.
Hmm... I think you should tell more about how people can be happy with themselves.
2021년 9월 29일
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In my opinion, I think two people must have a good relationship and generally have a healthy self-esteem or be fulfilled alone as individuals. It is also very important, they remain true to themselves. In a healthy relationship, trust, respect, trust, and healthy commucation will keep the relationship special and growing. Please note that you always write I in a capital letter because it stands for your name. If you need an English Tutor feel free to book a lesson with me; I would be very happy to assist you. I assure you you won't regret it. A trial lesson is $1.
2021년 9월 29일
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In my opinion, I think for two people to have a good relationship, they have to be Happy themselves. Also, it's very important to tell the truth.[?]. Confidence/trust, respect and communication are the only ways to maintain/build a healthy relationship.
Hi, Goretti. I made some generous edits to your work, mainly to explain "the only ways." Hopefully I did not misrepresent what you wanted to communicate. Hope this helps! Keep practicing your writing!
2021년 9월 29일
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