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I've seen somewhere learning a second language can slow aging. By the way I think always I make mistakes when I'm talking about the weather.
Today in the morning there was a clear blue sky, but at the evening it was pouring outside and it was very dark outside. By the way it wasn't thundering. Do you afraid of thundering? I think sometimes that lighting is beautiful. Due to the heavy rain I couldn't join my class at the right time, but we did it at 9pm.We talked about some different topics.One hour went very soon. These days are rainy and I think it's the best time to stay at home and read a fantastic story book with a coffee.
My exams are on my hand. It makes me boring to study in this rainy weather, but the fact is wether I study or not, the exams are going held at given dates. So I must want to study. It's not a new thing.
2021년 9월 29일 오후 5:33
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I've seen somewhere learning that a second language can slow aging. I think always I make mistakes when I'm talking about the weather.
Today in the morning there was a clear blue sky, but in the evening it was pouring outside and it was very dark outside. It wasn't thundering. Are you afraid of thunder? I think sometimes that lighting is beautiful. Due to the heavy rain, I couldn't join my class at the right time, but we started it at 9pm. We talked about some different topics. One hour went by very quickly. These days are rainy and I think it's the best time to stay at home and read a fantastic story book with a coffee.
My exams are on my hand [?]. It makes me bored to study in this rainy weather, but the fact is, whether I study or not, I still have to take my exams. So I must want to study. It's not a new thing.
Some comments:
** Review the meanings of 'soon' and 'quickly.
** You wrote 'in the morning' correctly, for describing things that occur in the evening, we can also use 'in the evening'
** 'By the way' is more of a colloquial term than something we use in more formal writing.
Good job! Good luck with your exams (: Let me know if you have any other questions
2021년 9월 29일
I've seen somewhere that learning a second language can slow aging. I think always make mistakes when I'm talking about the weather. (? These sentences seem like a non sequitur.)
Today in the morning there was a clear blue sky, but by evening it was pouring outside and it was very dark. There was no thunder.
Are you afraid of thunder?
I think sometimes that lighting is beautiful.
Due to the heavy rain my class didn't start at the usual time. It started at 9 p.m. We talked about some different topics. The hour went by very quickly.
These are rainy days. I think it's the best time to stay at home and read a good book while drinking a cup of coffee.
My exams are at hand. It bores me to study in this rainy weather, but the fact is whether I study or not, the exams are going to be held at the given dates. So I must study, whether I want to or not.
Just my ideas on corrections. There's lots of different ways to say things, but I think this cuts pretty close to what you intend. I've broken your essay into paragraphs that seem to me to be separate ideas.
2021년 9월 29일
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