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Alina
According to me many pointless rules without any reason are there in schools like I don't know in other schools this rule is there or not but in my school that is we all students have to be in a school uniform.Well i don't have any problem with the uniform but some baseless rules like we are not allowed to grow our nails.If we somehow manage to grow nails then we have to pay fine so this rule is very bad. And another is that girls are not allowed have pony tail.I always hated this rule because it has no connection with studies or student performance and boys are not allowed to have any kind of hairstyles.So in my opinion these rules need to be stopped.
2021년 10월 1일 오후 5:36
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I think there are probably many pointless rules in all schools; and I am not sure if this rule is there or not - but in my school all students have to wear a school uniform. Well, I don't have any problem with the uniform itself, but there are some some other baseless rules such as, we are not allowed to grow our nails. If we somehow manage to grow our nails, then we have to pay a fine - unbelievable, right? So this rule is very bad, because penalising someone for a natural human process is inhumane. Another futile rule is that girls are not allowed have a pony tail. I always hated this rule because it has no connection with studies or student performance - and boys are not allowed to have any kind of hairstyles. So, in my opinion, both of these these rules need to be reconsidered by those who make the rules.
Paragraphs help to frame an argument. (I polished all that only first section, only to read that you don't mind that rule - so why mention it? We would call your opening paragraph pointless, as it it doesn't meet the requirement of the piece. Or you can refocus it as they type of rule some hate, yet you are ok about. Hope that is useful.
2021년 10월 1일
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