Devon
Hello everyone, my plans for this weekend are staying at the hospital. Sadly I got injury my back. But my body is recovering very fast. I can move my body compare to yesterday. My roommate at the hospital is an old funny and wisely man and I like him. He can’t remember what he told me for 2 seconds but it doesn’t matter. The hospital worker are very kind and the doctor as well. I wish I could go home very soon to enjoy my weekend at home. At the end I wish everyone a better weekend than my mine 😜
2021년 10월 2일 오후 12:37
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Hello everyone, My plan for this weekend is to stay at the hospital. Sadly, I injured my back. But my body is recovering very fast. I can move my body more, compared to yesterday. My roommate at the hospital is a funny, wise old man and I like him. He can’t remember what he told me two seconds ago, but it doesn’t matter. The hospital workers are very kind and the doctor is as well. I wish I could leave very soon, to enjoy my weekend at home. In the end, I wish everyone a better weekend than my mine. 😜
Hi Devon, quite well done. Notice the order of adjectives starts with the things that can depend on your opinion, and finishes with things that are facts that you can't question. Funny is your opinion. Old - he can't change how old he is! Normally in writing, we write the words for numbers. In a text message, ok, but if you do an exam, they won't like it! Hospital workers is not really wrong, but it might be more natural to say hospital staff. It also is more common to say, "and the doctor, too." "Too" is normally used at the end of a sentence. You could say, "as well as the doctor." There is a slight difference between "I wish I could" - no possiblity, but it would be nice - and "I hope I can" - there might be a possiblity. Keep practicing and get better soon! Simon.
2021년 10월 2일
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Hello everyone, my plan for this weekend is staying at the hospital. Sadly I have got an injury in my back, but my body is recovering very fast. I can move my body in comparison to yesterday. My roommate at the hospital is an old, funny and wise man and I like him. He can’t remember what he told me 2 seconds ago but it doesn’t matter. The hospital workers are very kind and the doctor is as well. I hope I can go home very soon to enjoy my weekend there. In conclusion, I wish everyone a better weekend than mine 😜
2021년 10월 2일
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