Rashmi
1)I was born in November. 2)I am Rashmi. 3)I am right handed. 4)I have a black, wavy hair. 5)I am a night owl. 6)I like reading books. 7)My favorite talk show is ellen show. 8)My favorite season is spring. 9)My eye color is brown. 10)My favorite sport is badminton. All are random facts, I think^^
2021년 10월 2일 오후 4:57
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1)I was born in November. 2)I am Rashmi. 3)I am right handed. 4)I have a black, wavy hair. 5)I am a night owl. 6)I like reading books. 7)My favorite talk show is ellen show. 8)My favorite season is spring. 9)My eye color is brown. 10)My favorite sport is badminton. All are random facts, I think^^
Hi 👋 Because you are listing facts about yourself, many beginning with "I am", it would be clearer to say, "My name is Rashmi" even though the way you said it is indeed grammatically correct. I would also add the article "the" before "Ellen show" as it refers to one very famous television show. 📺 I hope this helps!
2021년 10월 2일
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