May I switch from would to will in an essay.
For instance

Were my suggestions to be considered, the youngest would highly gain health benefits in the long run. In lack of sports facilities, they will not be able to live a helathy life.

Thanks

Question

May I switch from would to will in an essay. 
For instance

Were my suggestions to be considered, the youngest would highly gain health benefits in the long run. In lack of sports facilities, they will not be able to live a helathy life.

Thanks

Answer

Yes, because in the first sentence you're saying what would happen if they followed your suggestions. It's a hypothetical situation because they're not following your suggestions yet. In the second sentence, it's a first conditional, future possibility if they continue without sport facilities.

Also, I would say 'With a lack of sport facilities', or 'Due to a lack of health facilities'. And as mentioned by the other teacher, healthy is misspelled.

Answer

This sentence is Conditional type 2, which is why only WOULD, not WILL

Answer

There is a spelling mistake in the word HEALTHY

Answer

I mean in the 1st sentence. In the 2nd sentence WILL is used correctly

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