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I went to an outlet mall and bought a jacket. It was really cute and nice. It was really bad weather so my umbrella was broken by the wind. I enjoyed myself and had a great time.
2025년 5월 17일 오후 11:36
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I went to an outlet mall and bought a jacket. It was really cute and nice. There was really bad weather so my umbrella was broken by the wind. I enjoyed myself and had a great time.
I have suggested using "there" to avoid any confusion about what "it" is here.
2025년 5월 18일 오전 1:39
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