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If people eat to much, they have problems with blood circulation. If I spoke English fluently, I would travel more frequently. If I don't pay my bills, I can be cut off from electricity. If you sit in the sun for too long, it will give you a bad sunburn.

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If people eat too much, they will have problems with their blood circulation. If I spoke English fluently, I would travel more frequently. If I don't pay my bills, I will have my electricity cut off. If you sit in the sun for too long, it will give you a bad sunburn.
I would use 'often' instead of 'frequently', but both are correct. Good work!

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