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Next comes rope skipping , making up 36% , followed by basketball playing , 24% .(original)
Question: Is the original grammatically correct?
if wrong, how to correct?
2023년 10월 13일 오후 1:27
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Usually in formal prose we write out 'percent' or 'per cent' (a little more old-fashioned).
2023년 10월 13일
The only grammar issue is that you should use a preposition like "with" or "at" between "playing" and "24%" rather than use a comma.
The punctuation also has issues. Don't put spaces before commas or periods ("full stops" in British English.)
2023년 10월 13일
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