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Yeajin
Well, I really love to go traveling. So usually I go to travel at least twice in a year.
Currently I really want to go Thailand which is my favorite country and I really miss Thailand these days. Actually I have been traveled six time in Thailand and especially I really love Bangkok.
But I am living in Germany now. So It’s little bit difficult to go there. Like Asian countries,, It’s because so far and expensive for flight ticket.
Now I haven’t decided country where I go next trip yet, but I will be go to country which have beautiful beach.!!
Please correct my sentences 🙏
2022년 6월 15일 오전 8:02
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Well, I really enjoy traveling, so usually I go on vacations at least twice a year.
Currently I want to go Thailand which is my favorite country and I really miss Thailand these days. Actually I have been to Thailand six times and especially I really love Bangkok.
But I am living in Germany now. So It’s little bit difficult to go there. Like Asian countries, it is so far and expensive for a flight ticket.
Now I haven’t decided country where I go next trip yet, but I will be go to country which have beautiful beach.!!
Please correct my sentences 🙏
Happy to chat with you if you like with your english, and if you ever get the chance visit Australia, many beaches for you :)
2022년 6월 16일
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Well, I really love to travel, so I usually travel/go on a trip at least twice a year.
Currently, I really want to go Thailand which is my favorite country and I really miss Thailand these days. Actually, I have been to Thailand six times already and I really loved Bangkok.
But I am living in Germany now, so it’s a little bit difficult to go there. Since Asian countries are far away from Germany, flight tickets are more expensive.
I haven’t decided yet which country I'll go visit on my next trip, but I'm going to a country which have beautiful beaches!!
Please correct my sentences 🙏
Good work. I heard that the south of Spain (Andalucía) has nice beaches too, maybe travelling over there will be less expensive than traveling to Thailand.
2022년 6월 15일
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Well, I really love traveling. So usually I travel at least twice
a year. Currently I really want to go to Thailand which is my favorite country and
I really miss Thailand these days. Actually I have been to Thailand six times and i especially love Bangkok. But I am living in Germany now.
So It’s little difficult to get there, As well as other Asian countries, because it's so
far and very expensive to fly there. Now I haven’t decided where I will go to
next, but I will most definitely go to a country with beautiful beaches.!! Please
correct my sentences 🙏
2022년 6월 15일
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